“This is your daily, friendly reminder to use commas instead of periods during the dialogue of your story,” she said with a smile.
“Unless you are following the dialogue with an action and not a dialogue tag.” He took a deep breath and sat back down after making the clarifying statement.
“However,” she added, shifting in her seat, “it’s appropriate to use a comma if there’s action in the middle of a sentence.”
“True.” She glanced at the others. “You can also end with a period if you include an action between two separate statements.”
Things I didn’t know
“And–” she waved a pen as though to underline her statement–“if you’re interrupting a sentence with an action, you need to type two hyphens to make an en-dash.”
Feeling a bit tired today so this is all I have, my good friends!
*GASP* I recognise your style anywhere! I frequented your deviantart page way back when for your comics. You were one of my biggest inspirations to draw, haha. It’s very nice to see your drawings again!
Oh goodness, their expressions and the way they move together is perfection. I love how you made the action lines flow through them as a whole. I can imagine two tiny frustrated humans totem-ed on top of each other trying to slash at Papyrus, haha.
*SQUEE* I am so happy and red-faced right now. I’m so honoured to think I inspired you, haha. I hope you have a good day!
My original rough demo for the full “We Are The Crystal Gems”
I wanted to write this song to bridge the feeling of the show at it’s start to the show it became with the help of the whole Crewniverse! The show had grown and changed so much and so had I! I’m very sentimental about this one!
